zindagi khubsoorat hai ise rango se bharne ka mann hota hi ,
jo v ho gya use bhulne ka mnn hota hai ,
jo hone wala hai uske liye taiyar hone ka mann hota hai ,
khul k hasne ka mann hota hai ,
khul k hasane ka mann hota hai ,
kisi ko muskurate dekhne ka mann hota hai ,
khud ko ek behtar insaan banane ka mann hota hai ,
ek sukoon se bhari khamosh zindagi jine ka mann hota hai .
hey! its great but just want to add something
if you want to make it more attractive
make rhyms with over oall word sound not just last two words!
for example door majboor hujoor shaoor
and try to make lines with same weight (size of the lines also sometimes)
like i have read somewhere (i don’t remember)
ek hasi par din uge, ek hasi yaar ki
ek hasi par raat ho, ek hasi udhaar ki
i will try , thank you
