She had some dreams some were enormous, some were small but someone tried to kill them all.The irony is that someone was no one else but she. This is because she never had the fortitude to set herself free.
Free from what? Free from every fear that curtailed her to move ahead, the fear of the past, fear of the future, fear of the present even the fear of the patriarchal society.
But soon she realised that she has got wings to fly and the power to kiss the sky. So the dreams again became alive and she began to thrive and will keep thriving until she survives!
(Help me amend this )
Should I modify this?
Or is it fine
You may use fears instead of fear
Yes in that line fear that curtailed her
Usme ?
Yes
Ok
So did u like it the poem vaise?
Please be honest
Yes I know there are
Please help me correct them if u can
It’s raw abhi I know
Ok bro for sure
Thank u for ur time
