main anjaan @theaksh
Mujhe nahi lagta me tumhara saath kabhi nibha paaunga,
Magar ye bhi sach hai tumse bichhad kar mar jaaunga.
Tumhe smjhunga kabhi ya tumhe kabhi smjhaunga,
Magar socha nahi tha tumpe kabhi haath uthaunga.
Badal Jana chahta tha tumhare khatir me bhi,
Afsos hai magar me jyada nahi badal paaunga…
Burayiya itni saari hai mujhme ki ginti nahi koi,
In sab ke baavjood bhi me tumhara har pal sath nibhaunga.
Mere vada hai tumse ki chahe tum na bhi ho mere sath,
Me har waqt bus tumko or sirf tumko hi chahunga.
#Aksh
Wow.
So is it about u and the other person.
Or in general poetry h?
General poetry hai😊
Amazing
Kahi pesh karte ho khud k poetry ko
Agar nh to karna chahiye.
I guess acha exposure milega😀😀
main anjaan @theaksh
Abhi us level par nhi pahucha jaha hona chahiye… bahoot kuchh seekhne hai. Bus kuchh log h jo smjh paate h meri poetry ko. Har koi nhi smjhta.