Sharing Our Innermost Thoughts

Dard bhi toh pyar ka hissa hai,
Pyar mai kabhi koi kissa pura toh koi adhura hai,
Maana dard hua tha hume tab,
Lekin jaruri nai dobara hoga wahi sub,
Shuruvat nayi kar chuke hai hum,
Bas guzare pal ko yaad kar kabhi ankhe hojati humari bhi num,
Pyar mai thodi nadani aur kuch galtiya maaf hai,
Pyar adhura hi sahi lekin koi gila nai, ye dil aaj bhi uske liye saaf hai…

Dard pyar ka kissa hai par kitna jhel hai wo tumko dekhna hai. Kissa adhura ta and dard ta na tab. Aab wapas usko kyu yad karna ? Kush rahna acha nahi lagta ?
Shuruvat nahi ho gaye to purane lamo ko viram do.bar bar zindagi ko uljane me kya maza hai ?

Ajeet me rahe to varthman barbad ho hoga !

Hum ateet mai nai je rahe,
Bas kuch lamho ko dobara jeene ki farmaish kar rahe,
Har chiz ko guzare kal jaisa na maano,
Pyar ko haseen samaj uski gahraiyo ko tum bhi jaano,
Zindagi toh waise bhi ek bhoolbhaiya si hai,
Haan maana kuch galtiya humne bhi anjaane mai ki hai,
Lekin jaruri nai vo humara vartaman ban jaye,
Vartaman mai kahi na kahi hote hi toh hai ateet ke kuch saye…

I think Ashish will respond to you, follow that chain please.

My point of view are very different and I don’t wanna upset you with my responses.

I see life half full. If given a chace I would never lead a life in pain, illusion or lies. With great efforts I found what I really want and I don’t allow myself to be in imaginary world. Neither I wanna run away from present or reality for few minutes of happiness as anyways this is the kind of petrol I want for my engine :)

I don’t want this brand petrol for my engine *

I totally respect your point of view and glad tht you have that way as well…

But haan meri ya kisi bhi writer ya poetry ka mltb kisi ko kuch galat way mai direct karna nai hota… it’s just that hum jo likh rhe shyd ye batao ke sath hua hai… humne ass pss dekha hai…

Kisi ko likh kar sukoon milta hai, toh shyd kisi ko relate kar, aur shyd kuch ko padh kar bs :)

I hope you respect my point of view as well :)

When I write things, I meant for me. I don’t wanna to be a fairytale world and I don’t like these kinds.

I too like Poems from queenn here.

I would be eager to read poems on life struggles, on independence day, on fight of poverty, middle man life etc just not okay with this illusions of love, breakup, one sided in repeat mode.

Baki likho yar sab ko barbar ka platform mila hai and haq hai.

Mam let’s finalise this here.
Yes you love the reality and i would prefer to see that according to the conditions.
Yes you see the glass half full and i see that based on what i am going through.

Yes we both are correct.
Na aap galat ho na hum.
Aap ko struggles pasand hai, hum un struggles ko solve karna fir vo reality me ho k ya fake world me reh k.

But hum dono sahi hai.

Beautifully answered…

Subka aapna aapna tarika n shok hota hai bas likhne ka aur express karne ka…

Kisi ko kuch sukoon deta, kisi aur ko kuch aur…

Thts the whole story

See you got the right people company who continue with your painful stories and these frictional lies. I am not good with these but looks like nowandme responds faster to poems than emotions :p

I end up being part of poems due to the response rate:p

Why does everything seems painful? Because we are holding on to it. Jaise hi we start leaving it behind sab thik hone lagta hai.

And what i think the reality is kahi na kahi sabhi ko pasand aata hai ye lies, ye fiction. Thoda bhaut to sab relate kar hi lete hai. Isiliye the response is good.
And if fictional lies gives relief to anybody to i don’t think so us me koi problem hai.

Also these poems have emotions tabhi responses aate hai sayed.

And sab kisi na kisi na chize me badiya hai hi, i am sure you must be great with some other thing.
But keep trying keep learning. Thats the key.

Haan ab vaada karo ki dur nai jaogae humse,
Pyar toh tha beshumar tha hamesa se tumse,
Tham lo dobara ek baar fir humara hath,
Is baar mat chodna humara sath,
Umid hai is br kuch adhura nai rahega,
Hum tumare hai ye dil tumse baar baar kahega…

Response to Ashish

Whatever anyone writes is not the thing tht individual goes through or its there reality…

Sometimes it’s the thoughts or emotions they see around and hence it makes them write and express things.

Baki no offense on any kind of writings or poems 🌼

Response to Priya

Vada rha jab tak hum hai,
Har din tumara hai,
Vada rha thama loya jo hath hai,
Chootne vala na vo sath hai,
Umeedo ko chod,
In haseen palo ko jeete hai,
Jo aadhura reh jata hai,
Use fir kabhi poora karte hai…

Tumare sath hi toh hum pure hai,
Tumare bina toh hum hamesa se adhure hai,
Har pal ko haseen banana hai ab humko,
Har roj thoda aur chahana hai ab tumko,
Tumari mohabbat mai doob jana hai,
Khud ko koh bas tujhko fir se pana hai…

Response to anonymous and Ashish. I never disrespected your poems. I have concerns with that imaginary, frictional lie emotions. It gives fake hopes and invite trouble at times.

I have started accepting reality and it’s better than these illusions. So I don’t like fantancy world. Otherwise all r writing good and keep writing.

Hum bhi reality mai hi jee rhe… aur hum aisi baate ya poems likh kisi ko fake hopes nai derhe… har kisi ka aapna writing style hota hai bs…

Ye shyd humara zone hai… fiction ya imaginary hai but kahi na kahi this is our type maybe this thing ppl doesn’t take it right… but humara koi intension nai kisi ko galat chiz ya hope dene ka…

Hume galat na samjho, aur har writing ko humari aapni life ka hissa toh na hi samjho… it’s just a poetry of imagination bs :)

I think I have clarified and would like to stop my chat here. As this space/platform has a whole different meaning for me.

Jaisi aapki marzi… maine aapko rokha nai post karne se ya na karne se…

Aur aapko ye lagta if yha hum sadness ya fake hopes derhe logo ko toh ye aapki soch hai… jisse mujhe galat bolne ka koi Haqq nai…

Take care please

Ashish. I repeat I am not disrespecting you. You know I would never ever comment if the post is from you as you are taking in weird direction. Best of luck.

Oh i am really sorry thats a typo.

I was saying you are not disrespecting 😅😅

Would you mind sharing that reality to me please.
Because what words i am arranging is also a reality.
Kahi na kahi to hai.
May be mere liye nhi hai, aap k liye nhi hai, but matlab ye nhi ki kisi k liye nhi hai.

Yes acceptance of the reality is really important.
But sometimes fantasy worlds really helps. Learnt this while i ride alone. It really helps.
Han that gives false hopes, but what if those false hope helps us achieving in something?
I don’t know aap ka, but muje to jaru help kar deti hai ye false hopes.

And we know you are not disrespecting us or the poems.