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LIfe is so miserable out here.
I explain myself to her from dusk to dawn
But I always failed, because she got “none”.
Fixing things might had worked
But that’s what I thought…right
because deep down in her heart, a never ending battle, she used to fight.
Every now and then we shared moments to cherish later
Which when remembered used to loose its glamour, You know the reason ?
Unknowingly, unintentionally It was me.
She has been a well wisher of mine
while i being the dirtiest one used to find “her surplus” in her vine.
Every little thing she does for me has its own charm
But still I see only the missed out part, which ultimately used to harm.
Harm what ? Your question will be
It harmed USsss…

This is something which I tried for the first time, that is to write my feelings in a poetic manner, I know I spoiled it, but please don’t judge me as a poet, just read and feel my feelings and get to know me how I am :)

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aamisha

Hey. You didn’t spoil it, it’s actually very well written. The fact that I can understand that it’s straight from your heart is incredible!

k

Hi,
You have written it so beautifully…
Amazing…
Touched every chord of my heart…
N also i must say you are a wonderful person…
It is never easy to accept one’s flaw
N admit it like this…

I hope u both are still together…
Let bygones be bygones…
Pls share your lines with her…
I am sure it will be treasured by her…

God bless you…
Thank you for sharing your heartmoving lines.
Good luck to you…

Hey! It is good and If the poem is actually the way you are feeling right now, I tell you that I have been through it. Just hang in there and try to find happiness if you know that she is the one or at the end of the day its all about how they make us feel. We might have doubts but dont let them take you down. Sit down and asses what is good for you and her. Efforts always win. Good poem 😊